JamesIrvine
New Member
Hi, i wrote this really short song/poem would like to have some peoples opinions please
Disconnection
concealing my thoughts,
behind my modern day mask
breaking down barriers of faces to
face
the deconstruction of barriers is
the reconstruction of society
the screens you so pathetically conceal
your weak incapable mind
fads that constantly change no matter day season or year
not exactly put in lots of thought but would like some people's opinions thanks
not sure if this is relevant but I'm only 15
Disconnection
concealing my thoughts,
behind my modern day mask
breaking down barriers of faces to
face
the deconstruction of barriers is
the reconstruction of society
the screens you so pathetically conceal
your weak incapable mind
fads that constantly change no matter day season or year
not exactly put in lots of thought but would like some people's opinions thanks
not sure if this is relevant but I'm only 15
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